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the subtitles blend in with the background making it hard to read

The story is really something else i wasn't really expecting not to mention the plot twist but what really makes me interested  is the moment the anime 7 shadow reference like seriously it ended up making me wanting for more Well done mate :) 

I'm not usually a person to use existing models, but as a huge fan of the series, and not to mention the fact that they are one of the best designed characters in terms of beauty, I just couldn't resist :D Of course I'm not going to use em like theyr in the series, they'll be their own chars different backgrounds everything, but glad you like em :D!

100% agreed mate as a huge fan of the series myself this'll make more interesting for sure. and I'm more glad you choose to have their own character traits and roles to fit on the story which i highly recommend this to anyone might as well support it for it's worth. 

Anyways thank you for this awesome update I'll be patiently waiting for next one :)

T Looks interesting

hey umm i hope your not cucking cid from the anime right? cuz u have alpha elf blonde in there

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I'm sorry bud I love cid and Atomic, but we doing what cid doesn't *.* Managing his harem properly... How can you not want a piece of them explain me :o? I'm talking in a sense of be in cid's shoes

i understand but for there character in the show there a reason why they love cid and meant more than anybody in the world is bc he save them from life or death situation but doing them like this would ruin what they stand for. that why alot of AVN dev stay away from anime show girls cuz they belong and love for the MC of the show. but its a cool idea that u made but i was hoping it was a diffent clan so that u can make OG character for ur own story but RN i love how u written the story so far

and sorry for the long reply

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I mean they are different, I used the girl designs out of respect of how well of a job the anime did in designing them. So yeah they'll look like em for sure, and I'm aiming for some type of group similar, but I'm not keeping their backgrounds story names. Most of em will be completely different characterwise as well except for delta her personality just fits the way she looks a full on wild cat. So I understand where your coming from! I usually use OG characters but this one time with those is just different, what can I say I'm an eminence addict myself. So designs, yes. Personality story names no basically

Found this in vndb, one of the few visual novels on itch that I liked

ETA on an update here?

now

so the soccer section, I'm confused as hell on where to put people as i know absolutely nothing about the actual game (Soccer) itself or what the positions even do in relation to the game

A month late to respond to this but you don't need to know anything about soccer to do that section. When you're introduced to the characters you're going to be assigning roles to you're told who would be a good fit in what position

It's a very good game, at first it's a little heavy but then it's more bearable. I wasn't expecting those little winks or references to the anime "The Eminence in Shadow". 

The option to change the color of the text does not work, it always remains blank, even if I change it to the others and the option is checked in the preferences menu

pretty sure tyrande is from WoW

Very good story, can't wait for the next update. Also music is top notch.

Is the Mac version up to date?

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Mac should be up to date yes, it's just untested due to not having a mac xd

Thank you, can't wait to start it.

if there are issues with it let me know!

this still getting worked on

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Yeah, 0.6 is being worked on currently I'm assuming a month max 2 months for next release.

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If i may, I would suggest either changing the color of the in game text or adding a thick enough black border to the text so that the text is more visible. The text is currently white and it often display on a white/ light background making it difficult to read without shoving my face into my monitor. 

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Yo mate,

Well I changed the looks of the settings a bit compared to the 0.4 ui, but it  has a setting to change the text color right there. Also the textbox transparency is changeable.


Your writing has improved pretty well since the previous versions, the dialogue in the previous versions have an artificial feel to it, it didn't really feel natural but now its much better. I'm excited to see how you continue to grow as an author.

Thank you mate! Apologies for the late reply, somehow missed this 

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Will there be impregnation? asking for a friend of a friend of a dude i know whos friend is curious totally

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How did I never get any notifications from this wth... My apologies! Yes, there will be, but I won't spoil a lot about it. The complete cast pregnancy? You'll have to wait for a very long time. The game is planned for multiple seasons, and I personally have no idea how long that's going to be. There will be a story related pregnancy though... Which will not take too extremely long. It's def planned to be announced in one of the upcoming updates. Perhaps 3-4 updates from now?

Hey Chaos, any idea when the next update will be out?

Public release will be somewhere next week. I just released it on patreon.

Thank you sir!

No problem :D

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brother the android version is “file unavailable”🥺🥺🥺, I guess joiplay time? it's huge file tho ugh

I do not make the android, it's made by someone else, uhm this should work ? https://mega.nz/file/ckEiWJRL#nNIdm1vEuG4XXd0ew4bTp3mJQ2tRGcFIWuLQigNL8vU

This is so good but character sizes are off.

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Eh, example?

head sizes and the sword chili form is big

if you mean the head from Izumi, yeah that's fixed on a later date, chibh eh... I like how it looks, so not gonna change that srry xd

I played a previous version on your patreon page, is this the same game but with new design for the girls? Excited for more updates!

Uhm, my other game is on my patreon as well, you might have play chronicles this is a complete new game

Fantastic story, Great character development. VN reads like a good anime. I can't wait for the next release. Thank you very much for such a good story line.

thank you!

You're welcome! When do you expect another release?

Won't be soon, as you may have seen my other game is still in development as well, and I did like 3 aote updates after each other, so I'm giving my other game some love right now,  Nov December is going to be chaos born still, in an I will start working on another aote update, so around februari, I'm afraid. So still a bit :c

Great, thanks for the update. I appreciate it. I'm going to check out Chronicles once I'm done with my current VN.

I'm going to add an ez-mode soon on chronicles so people who are there for the scenes have an easier time ^^

Just finished playing what's released. That was awesome. Fantastic character designs, especially the scene with the entire school body. Some girls I'm really looking forward to in there.

The trailer looks interesting, but I still wish there was an actual description of the game and story, like most games have on here

Yes, i might want to invest in a better synapse :D My apologies :D

Can u make in android?

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Definitely one of the hidden gems of games you can find here, it's pretty clear a lot of time was spent on it. Interesting story and characters. What makes things even better is the characters all look unique from other titles you can find.

Though, admittedly, I don't think I would've given it a chance if it weren't for the screenshots you have posted. Probably already in the works but the about section could really use some love!

Can't wait to see future updates though! Didn't want the game to end just yet.

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Thank you man! Yeah, perhaps I'll give the synapse a bit more love ^^

I love this game so much already, the characters are so CUTE and I'm dying for more of the story, I really can't think of a single  criticism or issue with the game thus far, keep up the great work and I really hope you create a Discord at some point!


~Ps
I desperately need a chibi Destiny plush in real life now ugh

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Aw, I appreciate it! God damn Destiny chibi plush would be wholesome though you are right! Maybe in the future? Who knows! Also there's a discord mate, seems I haven't added it on itch... I posted a link on the reply below this.

discord?

https://discord.gg/ecqMYt468H, here you go mate